Critique of the goldfish rider; Second render coming right up!

After Assembly 2014 and the competition I made my newest graphic piece for, I was completely exhausted and didn’t think I would touch that piece anymore…But then I remembered that I am a perfectionist and can’t just let a mistake be in an image. The work also received heartwarming feedback, which also gave an energy boost to have at it one more time. So, in few days, which half of it will be spent by my gruesomely slow computer trying to render and spit the image out and not to die in the process, I can present a second render. There have  been various brialliant ideas flying around by friends and strangers alike, which have been heard out and put to use.  Check me up in few days!